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The pain in my heart is unbearable,
My soul is like a empty black hole.
On my heart, there is a scar.
A scar that will never be healed.

The scar has been cut deeper and deeper over the years, from all my mistakes and embarrassments.
I tried to heal my heart and make the scare go away by looking at the good things in life. But. The bad memories come back stronger then ever before.

There are scares on my arm, the pain from the scares makes the pain in my heart go away for a short while.
My friends had told me to stop cutting but they don't fucking know the pain that I have felt! Nobody will.

My black soul is empty, my black heart is wounded. I feel like a nobody from kingdom hearts, wishing to be whole again. But never will be . . .
Will I ever be whole? Or remain heartless?
I will just have to wait and find out.
it's the way i feel sometimes

edit 1: Thanks so much for all the favs. even though it's like at 45 it's still a lot to me . . . you made my dark heart a little bit brighter (//_^)

edit 2: O_O 485 VIEWS?!?!? HOLY S**T!!
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Jomoku Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
There is a darkness made for the mind.
A terror of thought, a gold strand of truth.
This prism, a prison of light.

The darkness takes the pain, of what light would feign to be naught.
As i wrap a bandage over face, the dark judges not.

Why then so much terror my eyes should so then see.
This empty state, just a void, wanting a filling... an anguished sea.

As i walk amidst a mist, and see the vapor of my thoughts....
red , black ,and gray surround me.

This heart of mine, nor black, nor white.
Stands a stone gray.
As the sands come from the sea.
I welcome the black abyss.
just as it may.

greeting the terror of my mind, a way to warn and sway.. 
let my heart be a light.

is the heart not placed in darkness, covered in blood and half dying...
are there so many... that may feel....... the same.



thought you could use some feedback.
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kevrox369 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
I don't think ill remain in this world much longer at this point... I can't do it
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kevrox369 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
*hugs*....
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zAng3lz Featured By Owner May 14, 2010
Beautifull , Awesome poem .. Me too I feel like this somethimes ..
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Tears-Of-Insanity Featured By Owner May 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this! :D awesome poem
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shikity Featured By Owner May 14, 2010
Oh my god, this is awesome! It totally responds to my feelings! :heart:
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Crazysauce Featured By Owner May 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
wow that's awesome totaly from the heart!
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DarkAndLonlySoul Featured By Owner May 14, 2010
Thank you
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Crazysauce Featured By Owner May 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
no prob
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